A Vision Of The Future

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A Vision Of The Future

Postby BaldySlaphead » Tue Feb 24, 2015 8:50 pm

Hello,

This is my first time posting a song on here, so be kind! It's called 'A Vision of the Future' and it features vocals from an out of copyright 1964 BBC documentary featuring Arthur C Clarke.

https://soundcloud.com/baldyslaphead/a- ... future-m4a

I hope you like it but please feel very free to give me any constructive criticism; I consider myself in need of much improvement both musically and also with DAWs.

cheers,

Baldy
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Re: A Vision Of The Future

Postby Kdogcronin » Sat Mar 07, 2015 11:32 am

I absolutely love what you have done here. Good work mate.
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Re: A Vision Of The Future

Postby Kdogcronin » Sat Mar 07, 2015 11:34 am

I wouldnt say this is criticism but if only it was a bit darker it would be right up my street.
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Re: A Vision Of The Future

Postby Sir_Joselito » Sat Mar 07, 2015 11:08 pm

1:04 Remembers me of Purple Yellow Red and Blue by Portugal the Man lel

Anyway, great work you did here, really well arranged, good job.
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Re: A Vision Of The Future

Postby BaldySlaphead » Mon Mar 09, 2015 5:38 pm

Thank you both! :D

I don't know Portugal the Man, but I'll check 'em out. As for a bit darker, well maybe my next tune might be a bit darker.

But maybe it won't!
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Re: A Vision Of The Future

Postby Kdogcronin » Tue Mar 10, 2015 12:20 am

You do what you gotta do and I will listen. Keep it up ;) Check my tracks if you would like.
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