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bright n beautiful

Postby MichaelMusicStudio » Mon Mar 16, 2015 7:18 pm

sharing with u my first musicstudio song. the drums are similar to Alex tutorials.

https://soundcloud.com/michael-tyuplin/ ... -beautiful
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Re: bright n beautiful

Postby MichaelMusicStudio » Tue Mar 17, 2015 10:40 am

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Re: bright n beautiful

Postby 1_Yui » Tue Mar 17, 2015 1:11 pm

If you want us to have a look on your tracks, you'll need to post the "real" link to it.
https://soundcloud.com/you/tracks directs every user to his own tracklist, not yours. The same applies to your stream at https://soundcloud.com/stream
To share your song, you need to copy the URL you get, when you upload it, or click the share button and copy the URL from there. The share button on soundcloud is one of those shown under your song, there you should find it quickly.
Then we can finally listento what your song :)
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Re: bright n beautiful

Postby MichaelMusicStudio » Tue Mar 17, 2015 1:58 pm

1_Yui wrote:If you want us to have a look on your tracks, you'll need to post the "real" link to it.
https://soundcloud.com/you/tracks directs every user to his own tracklist, not yours. The same applies to your stream at https://soundcloud.com/stream
To share your song, you need to copy the URL you get, when you upload it, or click the share button and copy the URL from there. The share button on soundcloud is one of those shown under your song, there you should find it quickly.
Then we can finally listento what your song :)


why r the things so complicated)) thank u very very much!
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Re: bright n beautiful

Postby BaldySlaphead » Wed Mar 18, 2015 9:13 am

Nice. Michael! For me the drums were a bit high in the mix, but I enjoyed that.
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Re: bright n beautiful

Postby MichaelMusicStudio » Wed Mar 18, 2015 9:05 pm

BaldySlaphead wrote:Nice. Michael! For me the drums were a bit high in the mix, but I enjoyed that.


Will try to improve it. Thanx for advices)
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Re: bright n beautiful

Postby BaldySlaphead » Thu Mar 19, 2015 9:08 am

It's not really advice - it's personal preference. Feel free to ignore it!
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Re: bright n beautiful

Postby 1_Yui » Thu Mar 19, 2015 4:52 pm

Nice! I love such piano melodies and the used harmonies in general :)
I agree, that the strings and the melody should be a bit more in the foreground (louder), but that's everything I could criticize. Good job! :D
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